1. Hook (1–2 sentences)
Open with the one thing that's genuinely hard to find at this price point in this zip code. "Corner lot with a detached workshop, no HOA, and a full guest suite above the garage" is a hook. "Beautiful home with character" is not. If you can't identify what makes this property genuinely different, that's where you start — before you write a word.
2. Features (prioritized, not exhaustive)
Hit the must-haves buyers filter on: bedroom/bath count, lot size, garage, system updates, school district. Order matters — put what your target buyer cares about first. Include the year of major updates: "Roof 2021, HVAC 2019, water heater 2024" kills inspection anxiety before the showing happens.
3. Lifestyle / Neighborhood (1–2 sentences)
Buyers don't just buy a house — they buy a commute, a weekend, a school year. "Six-minute walk to the Saturday farmers market, bike path to the office park, 18 minutes to the airport" does more work than "convenient location" ever could. Use actual place names and actual distances.
4. Call to Action
End with a soft close that creates mild urgency: "Showings start Saturday — book your private tour before this weekend's open house." Without it, buyers bookmark and forget.