1. The vibe hook (1 sentence)
Lead with the feeling, not the floor plan. Guests buy experiences.
2. The space (3–5 sentences)
Describe the layout in plain English. How many guests does it sleep comfortably — not the fire code maximum, the actual comfortable number? Is the kitchen stocked for real cooking or coffee-only? Answer the questions guests message about before they book.
3. The one standout amenity
Every listing has a thing: the rooftop hot tub, the record collection, the wood-burning fireplace, the EV charger, the outdoor shower. Find yours and give it a sentence of its own — this is what guests screenshot and send to friends, and what drives the booking decision over a comparable listing at the same price.
4. Location in 3 specific facts
"Centrally located" is noise. Travelers care about: how many minutes to the main attraction, what coffee shop is walkable, and whether parking is included or a nightmare. Three concrete facts beat a paragraph of location fluff every time.
5. Who it's best for
Pre-qualify your guests in the last sentence. "Ideal for remote workers who need quiet and fast WiFi" or "Great for families — the backyard is fully fenced and the Pack 'n Play is set up." This cuts misfit bookings, which is where bad reviews come from. Fair Housing rules still apply — describe the space, not who you prefer to host.